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How I hate her...... by *Fealasy:iconFealasy:





How I hate her
more than dried up lipstick, spam trying to sell.
more
than the bitter taste of milk gone to hell
you want me to feel well
And then you tell tell
"don't worry about her trace on my cock
and her blood on my heart
we are no more, and broken appart"

How I hate her
more than dolls prettier than mine.
more
than papercuts, maggots and people feelin "fine"
you tell me it's over
done and bye
but I still see her in your eye eye
it's such a lie lie

How I Hate Her
More than sickness in a wound, kids gone mad.  
more
than the worst past memory I've ever had
you tell me she is dead
eaten and decomposed, less than dust
so..no more flirt flirt
only playing with dirty dirt
underneath her skirt

How I hate myself
More than all the girls you ever slept with.
more
than roadkills, wasps on icecream and pants I can't fit
you tell me you love me...alot..
almost as much as you loved her
How...
I hate
everything I say
How
I hate
to feel this way
©2004-2009 *Fealasy
:iconfealasy:

Author's Comments

Okie dokie... Well.. yess.. it's a poam.. about how I find myself hating someone... some girl...
It's pure jealousy, or atleast my take on it.. The image is just a "to go with it" thing.. kinda like it though.... heck.. it's me in the shower wearing a dress... hmm...
My (mine all mine) Dear dear ketchup-suicide took this pretty picture.

Guess the hate gives me wings.. or something funny.

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:iconjaysinin:
Very cool pic, great dark poem.
:iconnotrust:
I love this, very beautifully written. I love the rhythm, and very sad in its own way. Amazing poem.:blackrose:

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"There is something in each of us that wants us to be Unhappy. It creates in our imaginations problems that don't yet exist- quite often causing them to come true."
~Benjamin Hoff The Te of Piglet
:iconmedesign:
really intresting picture and intresting poem to go with it. like the last section the most
~cheers
:iconjaekyu:
I've heard that 'Love gives you wings'...

...didn't know that hate had the same effect, but it makes sense ^_^
:iconbuddman:
wow, sounds like u put alot of emotion in to it:blackrose:

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:iconbondedbyvelvetchains:
i simply love it! and u look pretty good in a dress! hehe

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:horns: :peace: :butterflytwo: :bounce: :poke: :fork: :lmao: :p :boing: :nirvana: :fuzzydemon:

I keep my drugs in a crayon box.
:iconabadox:
Wow, this is incredible. Such emotion put into this.

Very, very well done. *fav*

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I once shot a man just to watch him die... then I got distracted and missed it.
Clubs: :iconhaligonians:
:iconcthulhutheory:
amazingly emotional...really really well written.

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Drove through ghosts to get here.

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